On April 28th at 9pm PST/April 29th at 1pm Japan time, I will be presenting a webinar titled "MBA Reapplication for Success" as part of the AIGAC Graduate Admissions Virtual Summit. I will be taking questions as part of that webinar. Space is limited, but still available. For details, see http://www.aigac.org/summit/2010. A recording of the webinar will be available (details to follow).
-Adam
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April 23, 2010
Attend my Free MBA Reapplication Webinar
Posted by Adam Markus at 6:15 PM
April 18, 2010
Knewton: Probability vs. Combinatorics on the GMAT
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Knewton Tips: Probability vs. Combinatorics on the GMAT
Posted by Adam Markus at 5:23 PM
Labels: GMAT, TOEFL, TOEFL/GMAT/GRE
TOEFL AND IELTS Minimums at Oxford Said MBA
For applicants who are required to demonstrate their English proficiency, the new TOEFL and IELTS standards for Fall 2010 admission imposed at Oxford University's Said Business School pose a serious hurdle:
| Minimum score | |
| TOEFL - Internet | 109 |
| TOEFL - Computer | 267 |
| TOEFL - Paper | 630 |
| IELTS | 7.5 |
Please see below details of the required minimum scores:
TOEFL (minimum score required):
109 Internet based
267 Computer based
630 Paper based
IELTS (minimum score required): 7.5
The TOEFL/ IELTS test can only be considered valid if they were taken a maximum of two years prior to the application deadline for the stage in which you are applying."
-Adam Markus
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Posted by Adam Markus at 1:34 PM
Labels: Oxford Said, TOEFL, TOEFL/GMAT/GRE
April 14, 2010
MBA Reapplication: Why were you dinged? Now what?
On April 28th at 9pm PST, I will be presenting a webinar version of the post below as part of the AIGAC Graduate Admissions Virtual Summit. I will be taking questions as part of that webinar. For details, see http://www.aigac.org/summit/2010.
This post has been updated from last year.
Was your admissions game plan for Fall 2010 a failure?
For those, who have yet to apply, do you want to understand some of the common pitfalls you should avoid?
Below are the typical reasons for rejection(stated as questions) and some of my suggestions for developing a new strategy for future applications (mostly stated as questions). I base the following on my experience helping reapplicants successfully obtain admission at such schools as Harvard, Stanford, Wharton, Chicago GSB, Kellogg, LBS, and MIT.
1. Were you realistic? If there was one overall reason for failure that I would point to, it would be lack of realism about the process. Usually this involves ignoring one or more important factors:
-Specifically ignoring the rate of admission, average GMAT and/or iBT TOEFL / IELTS test scores, and GPA required of those admitted are all highly likely to result in applying to schools that an applicant has very little chance to enter. See below for more about this.
-Age. I don't blame applicants for this one entirely because B-schools often have an all inclusive message about who they admit that is not quite the real case. This is especially true in regards to age where it is very clear that programs can't say they will not let in older applicants, but actually they usually don't. For example, applying to Stanford GSB or HBS after the age of 30 might be worth trying, but your chances for admission (compared to the average rate of admission) are not great. HBS is fairly direct about the age issue (see my earlier post on the subject), but Stanford does not choose to deal with this issue in an honest and forthright manner. For those over 30, look at average age and age range when considering where to apply. Try to ask admissions privately about this issue, you might get a straight answer or not. (See my interview with Kirt Wood from RSM who gave a very clear answer on this issue.) Applying to most top programs once you are in your mid-thirties may very well be a complete exercise in frustration and once you are past 35, the chances for admission at many top programs appears to be slim. For those in and/or approaching their mid-thirties or older who want a full-time MBA experience, I think programs such as the Sloan programs at LBS, MIT, and Stanford as well as USC IBEAR are all very suitable. An EMBA is always an option.
-Last minute applications: Developing great applications takes time, doing them at the last minute is one of the easiest ways to increase your chances for rejection because it is highly likely that your essays were not well written, sufficiently strategic in the way they marketed you, and, possibly, not even proofread. I have worked with multiple reapplicants who had application errors and/or contradictions that created the appearance of dishonesty and/or caused confusion. Last minute work was often the cause for these problems.
-Lack of substantial research into/networking for the programs being applied to. If you did not make full use of each schools' web-based information, did not attend admissions events, did not visit campus, and/or did not communicate with alumni or current students, you probably did not know enough about the schools you applied to make an effective case for why you fit at them. Some applicants take such a passive attitude to learning about how a specific school fits them that the "Why MBA? Why Goals" essay is not really customized to establish fit with a specific school.
-Did not obtain sufficient and/or effective advice on your applications and application strategy from mentors and/or admissions experts (see below).
One thing I have found about successful reapplicants is that are highly realistic. Reality is a harsh teacher, but one you cannot afford to avoid.
2. Did you really know about the programs you applied to? How was that reflected in your essays? Did you merely restate obvious information about the school or did you show exactly what aspects of it will meet your academic and professional goals? Did you demonstrate a clear connection to the program? Did you even think about fit? Stating unremarkable things based simply on reading the website or brochure is not enough, you need to show why a specific program really fits your personality and goals. If you had an interview, how effective were you at establishing fit? Did you ask good questions to the interviewer? Could you express how passionate you were and how much you had to contribute to the school?
3. Was there a problem with the way you expressed your desire for an MBA or your goals?Actually almost every re-applicant I have worked with had a serious problem clearly articulating their goals. If you think your goals might be the problem, read this and complete the table you can find there. Were your goals based on any research? Were they interesting? Did your goals take present difficult economic circumstances into account?
4. Did your essays fully demonstrate your potential as a student and a professional? Did you come across as a unique applicant? The way you write about who you are and what you have done is a major way that admissions evaluates this. More specifically: Could you clearly express selling points about yourself in your essays? Did you provide sufficient details about what you did combined with a sufficient explanation for why? Are your essays about you or just about what you have done? Are your essays mere extensions of bullet points on your resume or do they tell effective stories about you? Do you really understand the essay questions? How effective were in writing about such common topics as contributions, leadership, and/or failure?
As is usual for Chicago GSB admissions, they have provided some great advice, this time on the topic of reapplication. If you plan to reapply to Chicago GSB or are just looking for general reapplication advice, I suggest reading GSB's "Making a Fresh Start." I especially liked the following very useful advice that is really applicable for any applicant:
Show us why you're different. Each year thousands of students apply to business school and yet many qualified candidates are not offered admission. With MBA admissions growing more and more competitive each year, it's really important to stand out in the crowd by attempting to differentiate yourself from those of a similar profile. Tell us about your challenges, interesting achievements, unique perspectives and stories.
Showing admissions why you are unique is something that all applicants should really focus on. For more about, please see my earlier post on being unique
5. Did you put a sufficient amount of time into writing your essays? Writing great essays usually takes time and multiple drafts. Did you write multiple drafts of your essays? Were your essays quickly written? Did a significant amount of thought go into them? MBA essays don't have to be literary masterpieces to be effective, but they do need to be well thought out and polished.
6. Did your resume (CV) present your professional, academic, and extracurricular experience effectively? A great MBA resume requires effective presentation of your past experience so that an admissions committee can gain insight into your potential to succeed in the MBA program and in your future career. A great resume is also an effective agenda setting device for an interview. Did your resume contain clear statements about your accomplishments? Did your resume honestly and effectively represent the full range of your experience? Did your resume showcase your potential as a manager, businessperson, and/or leader? Was your resume user friendly?
7. Did you really address any potential concerns that an admissions committee may have about your suitability as a candidate? Even though there is always an optional question available for this purpose, did you make use of it? If there was something you wanted to avoid discussing, maybe you should consider doing so. Assume that if you are aware of a possible problem with your application (test scores, GPA, work record) that admissions will be too. If you have something effective to say about you concern(s), I suggest addressing them.
8. How were your interviews? If you did interview, were you well-prepared? How do you judge your own performance? Did you practice enough? Are you good at interviewing? For non-native speakers: Are you good at interviewing in your own language? I believe that the only effective way to prepare for interviews is to be over-prepared: You need to appear relaxed and comfortable talking with the interviewer, to be ready to address the hardest questions, to be comfortable with your own selling points and the stories that support them, and have to have enough knowledge about the school to show a passion for it. If you were dinged from one or more schools that offered you an invitation to interview, chances are great that you really need to work on your interview skills. If you know that you are particularly weak interviewing, consider applying to at least some schools were the interviews are not considered very hard.
9. How were your recommendations? Did your recommendations honestly and effectively endorse you? Did they contain sufficient detail to help an admissions committee understand your selling points? Did your recommendations really evaluate both your strengths and weaknesses? Were your recommendations authentic or is there any possibility that an admissions officer would be concerned about their authorship? For more about recommendations, see here (Note: I have not posted an MBA specific recommendation post).
10. How good was the advice you received from other people about your application(s)? In addition to yourself, who read and advised you on your essays, resume, interview(s), and/or other aspects of your application process? Alums, mentors, admissions consultants or counselors, editors, and/or ghostwriters? While I would not suggest blaming those who advised you, you may want to seek out new or additional advisers. Of course if they told you that your essays, resume, or some other aspect of your application were weak and you did not address it, they were providing good advice. Additionally if they expressed concerns about your likelihood for admission, their advice might be good (beware of those who always hedge their bets).
If you relied extensively on an editor or paid a ghostwriter and seem to be getting dinged quickly, you have discovered the pitfalls of those highly dubious strategies. Consider writing your own stuff, getting an ethical and professional admissions consultant to advise you, and/or discovering the potential of your voice.
If you used an admissions counselor or consultant and did not get any good results, find someone else. Even if you like the consultant and even if that consultant was me, I would advise you to consider using someone else. If the consultant was able to get you to the interview stage, but you could not pass the interview, the consultant's application advice was likely to have been solid. If the consultant told you that you would have a very difficult time of it, you might still want to work with him or her. Sometimes first attempts simply don't work. It does not hurt to ask the consultant you were working with, to offer their perspective on your problems. Test scores, work experience, and application decisions that you have made might not have anything to do with the consultant. Still, If your counselor had limited experience, this is pretty much an indicator that you should have gone with someone experienced. If your counselor seemed exhausted or rushed, you also have a problem because this person is unlikely to be able to be devoted to helping you enough. If you purchased a counseling service and not the services of a particular counselor, I would not be surprised if you encountered someone overworked. After all, one critical difference between consultants who work for themselves and those that work for someone else is the amount they make for the work performed. Those that work for someone else make considerably less per hour and often have to work more and under higher pressure than those that work for themselves. Regardless of whether you use an individual consultant or a service, the issue will always come down to the specific advice you are being given, which means the particular person you are working with. In addition to contacting me, one good resource for finding a new counselor is through the Association of International Admissions Consultants where you can find a directory of my colleagues around the world who are committed to providing high level service to their clients.
11. Was your GMAT within the school's 80% range? Was your GMAT below average? Obviously if your score was below the 80% range, you should assume your chances for admissions were less than the stated admissions rate. If it was was within the range, but significantly below the average score, you should assume that it was a contributing factor to your results. I am not saying to apply only to schools where you are within the range (see my earlier post on this issue), but I would suggest taking account of the risk in terms of (1) school selection, (2) the number of programs you need to apply to, and (3) expectations for success. As far as reapplication goes, studying GMAT is almost always necessary for those with less than a 700 GMAT. If your GMAT was 700 or higher and you were rejected, GMAT was almost certainly not your main problem.
12. Was your GPA equal to, above, or below the average reported GPA for the school? If it was below, this may have been a factor against you. If you GPA is significantly below the average GPA and your GMAT is equal to or above the average score, did you write an optional essay? Did you highlight your academic potential in some way to counter the issue of your GPA?
13. Did your TOEFL meet the school's minimum stated requirement? If your score was below the minimum, did you discuss this in the optional or some other essay to make the case for your English abilities? At this stage, you need to improve your score for Fall 2010 admission. If your score on TOEFL is really weak, have you considered taking IELTS? Some applicants actually will do better on this test than on ibt TOEFL. It is not easy to prepare for a new test, you might really want to try it out and see which test is better for you.
14. Were you realistic about school selection? I think you need to look at the portfolio of schools you applied to and ask yourself the following questions:
-Did I apply to programs with low rates of admission?
-Did I apply to enough programs?
-Did I apply to a wide enough range of programs?
See my posts on ranking such as "The 100" for some strategies for selecting schools.
15. Were you honest about the way you presented yourself in your whole application? As a strong advocate for honesty, I have a bias for this particular approach to the process. If you are getting dinged after misrepresenting one or more aspects of your experience, you might want to consider that it is the job of admissions officers to eliminate liars. Liars get through anyway, but not all of them. If you have over-marketed yourself, you may also have come across as less than authentic.
I know that getting rejected is no fun, but if you are committed to the process, I think you can make your next round of applications a success.
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-Adam Markus
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Posted by Adam Markus at 12:53 PM
Labels: Admissions Consulting, Essays, Interviews, MBA, MBA留学, reapplication
Guest Blogger: 河野太一のGMAT OG12解説 SC8
This is another post from Taichi Kono, author of two textbooks on TOEFL and one on TOEIC and a highly experienced TOEFL, TOEIC, and GMAT instructor. Most of his posts will be in Japanese. This post is on GMAT sentence correction. His other posts can be found here.
-Adam
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河野塾代表の河野太一です。年来の友人である Adam Markusさんのご厚意で、"The Official Guide for GMAT Review, 12th Edition"の解説ブログの内容の一部をこちらにアップさせていただくことになりました。オリジナルは河野太一のGMAT OG12解説でご覧いただけます。なお、オリ ジナルのほうは予告なく内容を変更することがあり、ここに上げたものと相違があることがありますのでご了承ください。私のこれまでの記事やGMAT以外の 話題についてはこちらをご覧ください。
SC8
The ... big bang theory holdsがSVで、holdsの目的語となるthat節に下線。holdは「〜と考える、主張する」。
(A) まったく問題ない。 ten to twenty billion years agoも「100から200億年前」でOK。from A to Bを覚えている人は多いだろうが、このようにfromを伴わない表現もある。cf. Bacteria like anthrax are infective within two to three minutes of exposure. (Google) 「beganは過去形なのに、has beenは現在完了だからダメ」などという訳の分からない「時制の一致」を持ち出さないこと。「同一センテンス内の動詞の時制は同一でなければならない」 というルールは存在しない。beganは過去に起こったこと、has beenはそれ以来現在まで続いていることを示しているだけ。主節のholdsが、この文が「現在基準」であることを示しているから現在完了も問題ない。 ago(過去)やever since(現在完了)といった「時制インディケーター」も存在し、完璧。
(B) 「時制の一致」を拡大解 釈している人が引っかかってしまいそうな選択肢。「andの前後とも過去完了形で、時制が揃っている」という理由で選んではいけない。過去完了形は「過去 を基準としてそれ以前をふり返る」時制。(B)では主節のholdsが現在形、後ろは過去完了形となり、「過去」が存在しなくなる。どちらの過去完了形も 「基準なき過去完了」で、ダメ。
(C) the beginning ... was an ... instantとなっており、実に不格好。「物事=継続時間」という言い方は通常しない。cf. The meeting lasted (for) two hours./*The meeting was two hours.(*は不適切な表現)。関係代名詞thatが指すものも不明。もしan ... instantを指すのであれば、後ろの動詞has expandedと意味的につながらないし、時制もムチャクチャ。
(D) <hold O to be>で「Oが〜であると考える」という表現があることはある。to have beenの形は本動詞とtoの後ろの動詞の時制がズレていることを示すための時制表現で、OK。しかし動詞がbe動詞では結局「物事=継続時間」になって しまう。関係代名詞thatの先行詞も相変わらず不明。
(E) <hold O to do>で「Oがdoすると考える」を意味する表現はない。しかもand以降のhas been expandingと形が揃わなくなるので、has been expandingは主節の動詞holdsと並列されていると考えざるを得なくなる。すると、The ... big bang theory has been expandingというつながりになってしまって、意味を成さない。ここで「本当に<hold O to do>はないのだろうか」などと考えてコーパスを調べるのは時間のムダ。「素直に<hold that SV>を使いなさいね」という、出題者からのメッセージと考えておこう。
-河野太一
河野塾で はTOEFL/IELTS/GMATの個人授業を提供しております。なかなかスコアが上がらずにお悩みの方、きめの細かい効果的な個人指導をお求めの方 は、ぜひinfo@konojuku.comまでお気軽にお問い合わせください。
Posted by Adam Markus at 12:17 PM
Labels: GMAT, Japanese, Taichi Kono, TOEFL/GMAT/GRE
April 07, 2010
GMAT Tip from Knewton: Speeding up your Reading Comprehension
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Kalyan Dudala is one of Knewton's
Posted by Adam Markus at 10:00 AM
Labels: GMAT, TOEFL, TOEFL/GMAT/GRE
Register Now for Free Online Graduate Admissions Summit
As a member of AIGAC, (the Association of International Graduate Admissions Consultants), we are excited to announce the first ever AIGAC Graduate Admissions Virtual Summit. The AIGAC Summit, taking place on April 28, 2010, is a free, online event addressing many of the issues faced when putting together a graduate school application.
Admissions experts from around the world will be weighing in on topics including law school admissions, internationalizing the MBA experience, evaluating your candidacy for medical school, and joint-degree programs, amongst other subjects. The webinars, chats and articles will offer advice on writing compelling essays, self-assessment, interview preparation, TOEFL & GMAT strategies and re-applications; as well as specific tips for engineers, international students and Fulbright applications.
Where else can you benefit from the expertise of so many experts who collectively have 100+ years of experience? Thanks to the day-long format across multiple time zones, you can join in from your computer no matter where in the world you are.
Visit http://www.aigac.org/summit/2010/ to learn more about the AIGAC Graduate Admissions Virtual Summit. You will need to register for each hour long event that you plan to attend; you may attend as many as you wish.
I will be conducting a seminar on reapplication.
Hope you can make it!
-Adam
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Posted by Adam Markus at 9:49 AM
April 04, 2010
Guest Blogger: 河野太一のGMAT OG12解説 SC7
This is another post from Taichi Kono, author of two textbooks on TOEFL and one on TOEIC and a highly experienced TOEFL, TOEIC, and GMAT instructor. Most of his posts will be in Japanese. This post is on GMAT sentence correction. His other posts can be found here.
-Adam
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河野塾代表の河野太一です。年来の友人である Adam Markusさんのご厚意で、"The Official Guide for GMAT Review, 12th Edition"の解説ブログの内容の一部をこちらにアップさせていただくことになりました。オリジナルは河野太一のGMAT OG12解説でご覧いただけます。なお、オリ ジナルのほうは予告なく内容を変更することがあり、ここに上げたものと相違があることがありますのでご了承ください。私のこれまでの記事やGMAT以外の 話題についてはこちらをご覧ください。
SC7
As SV, SVという構造の後ろにもうひとつSVを付けろと言われている。
(A) 後ろに付くSVには接続詞ないしはその類が必要。(A) では関係代名詞の省略が想定できる。であれば関係代名詞の後ろは不完全、つまり名詞が1つ欠けていなければならない。ここで名詞が入りうるのは concededの後ろ。するとconcedeが自動詞か他動詞かが問題になる。自動詞であればconcedeの後ろに名詞の不足はないことになり、関係 代名詞の省略という想定は成り立たない。結論から言うとconcedeは自動詞も他動詞もあり。英語には自動詞他動詞どちらの用法も持っている動詞が多 く、判断に迷った時は前後の意味から推測せざるを得ない場合もある。concedeを「譲歩する」と覚えていれば、the mass market salesとto rivalsから、「ライバルに譲った売上」→「ライバルに負けて取られた売上」と理解できるだろう。すなわちconcedeが他動詞で、後ろには目的語 が抜けており、その目的語の役割は省略された関係代名詞が果たすと想定され、文法上問題なし。しかしこの選択肢、そもそもtheyがマズイ。theyが指 すものは意味的にthe companyであろうから、数が合わない。As節ではitsで受けているので、数の違反は一層明らか。
(B) (B)もtheyがダメ。previouslyの位置も気になる。would have doneは「〜したであろう」と、現在から過去をふり返って推測する語法(いわゆる「仮定法」)。その「推測」部分(であろう)は助動詞wouldが担当 するので、「過去には〜したであろう」と言いたければwouldに副詞句を隣接させるのがよい。したがって(A)の修飾位置は良い。(B)だと previouslyがto rivalsにかかってしまい、「過去にはライバルたちに譲ったが、今は別の人たちに譲っている」かのような誤解を与える。要は「修飾語被修飾語近接ルー ル」違反。theirも数の呼応違反。
(C) in the pastがwouldの前に出ているが、wouldに隣接しているのでOK。受動態も、能動態のほうが良いだろうが、意味は通じているので取りあえず通 過。previouslyがin the pastと重なっており、redundantでアウト。
(D) previouslyとin the pastがやはりredundant。ただしin the pastは位置的に、名詞rivalsを後置修飾している可能性もある。するとwouldを修飾しないのでredundantではなくなるが、「過去のラ イバルに譲っていた」となってしまい、「じゃあ今のライバルには譲り続けているの?」という疑問が湧く。どちらにしてもダメ。
(E) こ れまでの問題点をすべて解決しており、問題なし。
-河野太一
河野塾で はTOEFL/IELTS/GMATの個人授業を提供しております。なかなかスコアが上がらずにお悩みの方、きめの細かい効果的な個人指導をお求めの方 は、ぜひinfo@konojuku.comまでお気軽にお問い合わせください。
Posted by Adam Markus at 7:57 PM
Labels: GMAT, Japanese, Taichi Kono, TOEFL/GMAT/GRE
April 03, 2010
Money: Ask for it!
Imagine a situation where you have been admitted to three graduate schools (MBA, MPP, MPA, MS, MA, PhD, LL.M, or anything else) for Fall 2010 and the programs are offering you the following scholarship packages:
School A, your top choice, has offered you nothing.
School B, your second choice, has offered you a 50% tuition waiver.
School C, your third choice, has offered you free tuition.
Assume that the total cost for tuition and living expenses at the three schools is the same. Assume your criteria for ranking these schools is based on some combination of your overall sense of fit, program rank, program reputation (brand value), expected post-degree starting salary, and location. Assume you actually either have the money or can obtain loans to go to attend any of these schools. Finally, assume that you have just received all three offers. What is the next thing to do?
ASK SCHOOL A FOR MONEY!
The worst situation is that School A can say that they are unable to offer you any money. They can't withdraw their offer of admission, so without being rude, just politely explain your situation and ask them for money. Don't lie about what Schools B and C are offering you and be willing to give School A the details. School A might not offer you anything and you might very well decide to go there anyway, but it never hurts to ask.
The above suggestion is based on observing what some of my clients do. They don't always succeed at getting more scholarship money, but often they do. I am not professional negotiator, so I can't tell you the best way to actually negotiate, but I can tell you that it never hurts to ask.
-Adam
Posted by Adam Markus at 10:06 AM
Labels: Scholarships, School Selection
April 01, 2010
HBS IS RADICALLY CHANGING ITS CURRICULUM
It was announced earlier today that HBS would be radically changing its curriculum. According to Dean Light, "Case study is so 20th century, therefore as my last major act before I retire, I am happy to announce that we will be going 100% project based. This change may seem sudden, but I thought, well, why not create a management challenge for the entire faculty and new dean?"

Posted by Adam Markus at 4:41 PM
Guest Blogger: 河野太一のGMAT OG12解説 SC6
This is another post from Taichi Kono, author of two textbooks on TOEFL and one on TOEIC and a highly experienced TOEFL, TOEIC, and GMAT instructor. Most of his posts will be in Japanese. This post is on GMAT sentence correction. His other posts can be found here.
-Adam
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河野塾代表の河野太一です。年来の友人である Adam Markusさんのご厚意で、"The Official Guide for GMAT Review, 12th Edition"の解説ブログの内容の一部をこちらにアップさせていただくことになりました。オリジナルは河野太一のGMAT OG12解説でご覧いただけます。なお、オリ ジナルのほうは予告なく内容を変更することがあり、ここに上げたものと相違があることがありますのでご了承ください。私のこれまでの記事やGMAT以外の 話題についてはこちらをご覧ください。
SC6
the chambers (S) ... were (V) closed (C)。repairがcleaningと結ばれる名詞であって動詞でないことは、「the chambersがrepairする」という意味のおかしさと、repairの後ろに目的語がないことから分かる。主節に続く前置詞句、ないしは接続詞節 に下線が引かれている。
(A) due toはまとめて1つの前置詞と考えればよく、文法的にはOK。ただし「湿気のため閉館された」となる点が気になる。「湿気があるレベルに達したこと」が閉 館の理由であるはず。湿気があること自体は、もしそれが低いレベルに留まるならば、閉館の理由にはならない。moistureに受身の形容詞 exhaledが後置されるのはOK。関係代名詞whichがtouristsという人を指すとは考えにくい。するとmoisture ... tourists全体、すなわち親玉であるmoistureにかかるのかといえば、それであれば意味的に制限用法にすべきようにも感じられる。残る可能性 は「旅行者が湿気を吐いた」という内容そのものを指すことだが、前がSVになっていない上に、「前の内容を指すwhich」自体がGMATでは御法度。こ れだけでは切れないにせよ、かなりアヤシクなってきた。itsが指しうるものがmoisture、the pyramidを始めとしていくつかある上、意味上はthe chambersを指すのが最適と思われるため、この時点でほぼアウト。such ... so thatで完全アウト。suchとas/thatの組み合わせは<such ... as +名詞><such ... that SV><such ... as to do>の3パターンを覚え、さらにそれぞれにsuch as/such thatのように隣接するパターンがあることを知っておこう。
(B) やはりdue toが気になる。had raisedの過去完了形は主節のwereを基準時とした「それ以前」なのでOK。関係詞節をmoistureと隣接させたことにより修飾関係が明確に なった分、(A)のwhichより優れる。therebyは単なる副詞なので無視すればよい。問題はdoingの副詞用法で使われているraising。 関係代名詞thatの後ろに置かれているため、意味上の主語がthat節内の主語であるtouristsの可能性と、主節の主語であるthe chambersの可能性が出てくるが、「湿度を上げた」のはmoistureであろうから、どちらにしてもおかしい。such ... thatはOK。wouldは「推測」の助動詞willの過去形なので、「(閉館の時点で)これからcrystallizeするであろうレベル」となる。 予防的に閉館した可能性もなくはないが、違和感はある。
(C) because節のSVがtourists were exhalingであるため、「旅行者が湿気を吐き出していたために閉館した」となってしまう。後ろにwhich had raised ...が続くとはいえ、違和感は拭えない。過去進行形もアヤシイ。部屋が閉館された時点では旅行者がexhaleした行為は終わっていたはず。which の前にカンマがあって非制限用法になっているため、moistureを指す可能性と、tourists ... moistureまでの内容を指す可能性が生じ、あいまい。within themのthemはtouristsとthe chambersの両方を指し得るが、the humidity withinと隣接させることよってthe chambersであることが示唆されていると考えれば、さほどのキズではない。OGの解説にもthemについての指摘があるが、まったく説明になってい ないのが笑える。such thatは問題。suchとthatを隣接させた場合は、suchが直前の名詞にかかるのではなく、SV such that SVの形で、SVとSVを順接で結ぶ意味合いが強くなるからだ。ここではsuchはlevelsにかけて「that以下になるようなレベル」と言いたいは ず(そうしないとlevelsが単なる無冠詞複数になってしまう)なので、やや疑問が残る。wouldも依然気にかかる。
(D) due toの代わりに前置詞表現のbecause ofを置いているが、(A)(B)と問題点は同じ。raisingの前にカンマがないために、これはdoingの副詞用法ではなく、名詞tourists を後ろから修飾するdoingの形容詞用法(いわゆる「現在分詞」)と受け取れる。旅行者は間接的に湿度を上げているかもしれないが、やはり raisingはmoistureにかけるのが妥当であろう。とはいえ、このraisingがmoisture ... tourists全体にかかると考えるのもmoistureとraisingの位置が離れているだけに無理があるし、どちらにしてもあいまい。 levels so high ...はOK。先ほどのsuch that隣接と違い、形容詞highが名詞levelsを、so ... as toに挟まれる形で後置修飾していると考えられるからだ。
(E) どうもスッキリする選択肢がないので、(E)がダメだったら悩んでしま うところだが、助かった。moisture exhaledの後置修飾、接続詞becauseを用いてmoisture (S) ... had raised (V)の主述関係を明確にしたこと、such ... that、とすべて問題なく、これが正解。themのあいまいさが気になるが、(C)で述べたようにthe chambersを指していることが示唆されており、キズとしてはマイナー。the stone was crystallizingは、部屋が閉館された時点でまさに進行していたことだから、過去進行形でOK。
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